I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
5 facts about Quentin Blake 1. Quentin is 86 years old 2. Quentin is an illustrator 3. Quentin illustrates books for children 4. Quentin is also an actor too. 5. Quentin was born 16 December1932
I am pleased to see how much work you completed for your blog post in the short time frame we had. You were on task and even took on feedback to add some images to support your writing.
Next time I would like to see an introduction on your blog explaining what the task is for and what you are sharing with us!
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Kia ora Nykachia.
ReplyDeleteI am pleased to see how much work you completed for your blog post in the short time frame we had. You were on task and even took on feedback to add some images to support your writing.
Next time I would like to see an introduction on your blog explaining what the task is for and what you are sharing with us!
- Miss Birtch