Sight: beach
Man vs demon. Ok so one sunny day there was a man swimming. The man that was getting chased looked like he had brown hair, green eyes and medium to tall and had a swimsuit on and was swimming across the river until there was a demon. so the demon looked just like a demon and then the demon was in the water just slowly coming up and when he saw the human trying to ruin something of his he Strated chasing him.
then next the human started running out of the water and into his car and drove off to a building where he lives.
next the human thought the beast was gone and so he went to sleep and then 3 hours later it was 10:36 pm. So the demon quickly runned to the humans house and the Niebuhr was awake and saw the demon run into his neighbor's house so then the neighbors thought actually nah I must be dreaming. But no it was no dream it was real.
The human then woke up because he heard his door slammed open and shut so the human quickly ran into his closet and shut the door quietly.
Then after a couple of minutes the demon came in and looked and looked and opened the closet slowly so when the human saw the demon opening the closet door he just pushed it with his hands and the human ran away down the stairs and out of his house and across the road and into the woods.
After 4 years the demon gotten old and still looked for human so then the demon didn't care if he was old or slow he just looked in the woods. So then something moved in the bushes so the demon looked and he found the human old and slow like him.
So then they apologize to each other. The human apologized for breaking something of his and the demon is sorry for chasing after him.
So then after that
Hi nykachia I like your writing but add more full stops because your not using it in the writing your only using it at the end of the story anyway bye
ReplyDeleteHi Nykachia, thanks for publishing your story. I do like the way the human and the demon apologised to each other. Very nice! You do need to think about using full stops more. Is the story finished? The last line make it look like it might not be?
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